How I wrote ‘Lines Overheard at a Séance’

    Lines Overheard at a Séance began life as an improvisation for last year’s 50/90 songwriting challenge. I turned on the keyboard, sat down and began to play. The only decision I made beforehand was that I was going to start on a slightly unusual chord: D/C#

    Before long I had the rising bassline and out of kilter chords. The lyrics came to me at the same time, exactly as you hear them on the recording – in fact I’ve only ever played and sung this song once: everything you hear from vocals to piano to bass is all one take and semi-improvised.

    Lyrically its what the title suggests – I’m not too sure any more explanation is needed.

    Here’s the original demo:

    Lines Overheard (Demo)

    There’s a red red room that I can remember
    With a clawing branch right outside the window
    And I’m not breaking down

    On a cold cold night I saw something evil
    Turned the red red walls a deep shade of grey
    And I’m not breaking down

    Won’t you tell me where the last one is?
    There are ghosts in my dreams,
    But I can’t hear them

    Two New Steampunk Songs

    I’ve started contributing to the 50/90 songwriting challenge, and already have two new songs. Here are two acoustic demos:

    The Beast of the Air

    We Sprang into Motion, When they told us the news
    Half a herd snared by the beast of the air
    Propellers a-whirring, we took to the sky
    Off to ensnare the Kraken

    And as we rose higher, our engines a-blur
    A strange copper tang, filled up our lungs
    The scent of the kraken, afloat on the breeze
    Grew stronger the closer we flew

    The beast of the air wails a song
    Wails a song to keep us dreaming

    An eye through the clouds
    Tentacles reaching
    An eye through the clouds
    Tentacles bewitching

    The beast of the air wails a song
    Wails a song to keep us dreaming

    If the lights were never switched on

    They say history changed that day
    When they tried to switch the lights on
    Half a thousand dead
    When the tried to switch the lights on
    Maybe bad luck, maybe poor design
    But they changed the law that day
    Now we’ll never switch the lights on

    A century of mining
    Of oil spills, and gas explosions puncturing the earth
    A century of digging
    Gave us blackened skies and ruined fields and cities filled with smog

    And from this balloon we see
    The world encased in iron
    And from this balloon we see
    The world we used to have
    And from this balloon we see
    The world encased in iron
    And from this balloon we see
    The world we used to live upon
    before we turned her sour

    How I Wrote ‘Bad Dreams’

    Bad Dreams, the fifth song from Spinning the Compass is one of my favourite of all the songs I’ve written.

    It began life as a short song for the 50/90 songwriting challenge, the absurd summer competition where songwriters challenge themselves to compose 50 songs between July 4th and and October 1st. Here’s the original demo:

    Bad Dream (Demo)

    As well as the production values, there are some obvious differences – I’ve since composed an entire middle section that foreshadows one of the vocal lines from the end of the title track from the album (‘They’ve been spinning the compass again…’).

    I’m really happy with the solo section after the second verse, which borrows heavily from Frank Zappa, via all the Steve Vai and Dream Theater songs I’ve listened to. The structure of the song, with it’s three verses portraying various nightmares, was heavily influenced by ‘One More Red Nightmare’ from King Crimson’s ‘Red’.

    Does that leave anything original in the song? I don’t know, but I’m still really proud of this one.

    The cables break
    Car begins to fall down
    An electric flash and I’m heading for the ground
    All around me people panic and scream the cables break
    Another bad dream

    Bones begin to fall down
    The ashes begin to rain
    Red washed cry a strangers cry of pain
    Your safe safe world is nothign like it seems
    Bones begin tof all down
    Another bad dream

    They’ve been spinning the compass again
    Changing the rules as we play
    These Bad dreams are spinning me round
    With this compass a way can’t be found
    They’ve spinning the compass again.
    Spinning the compass again.

    Flashing knife broke through my guard
    A bolt of light dazzling my eyes
    Trip and stumble red water in the stream
    A flashing knife
    Another bad dream

    A Puzzle to Solve.

    My first is in steam, but not in engine
    My second is in engine but not in trial
    My third is in love but not in trust
    My fourth is my second come around again
    My fifth is in never and not in freedom
    My whole is a number to enter in here

    Solve the puzzle, figure out the password and you get to hear a new demo song. Fun Eh?

    How I Wrote ‘Home’

    Home is a song I’ve had hanging around for rather a while. How long? Here’s a really rough ‘first time I’ve ever heard the thing’ run through with a college band. It was recorded in 2002. That’s how old it is.

    Home (Demo)

    There’s a violin on this that you can just about hear. Great violin player, but she was standing too far away from the little mini-disc recorder.

    Oh, and isn’t it obvious how unprepared the drummer was? I think he was halfway through a residency with a Blues Brothers tribute and was completely dead to the world when attending college…

    Anyway, the song itself is about missing the object of one’s affections because you’ve been away from home too long hunting big game from an airship.

    Of course.

    The lead parts  were improvised – I recorded plugged my guitar into my Sonuus G2M midi converter and recorded both original guitar sound and the midi signal through a synth patch. Lots of fun.

    I was going for big pop chorus with quirky verses, and personally I think it achieved that. Still, although it gets listened to, Home appears to be the least popular song on Spinning the Compass.

    At least I like it.

    Leaving the earth was such a thrill
    A ship of the sky, lighter that air
    At hunting grounds we made our kills
    Kings of the great game, on top of the sky

    They say we’re took the long way
    Say we’ll soon touch down
    I don’t see that, I’ve only eyes for home.

    Thrill of a lifetime but I’ve been away too long
    What I would give, to touch the earth again

    They say we took the long way
    Say we’ll soon touch down
    I don’t see that, I’ve only eyes for home

    They say we’re coming home soon
    They say the clouds are grey
    I don’t see that, I’ve only eyes for home

    And all the kills, all the trophies, all the game that we bought down
    All the hides, all the skulls, all the savage beast we found
    I would give them all, every one if it would bring you close to me
    I’d chant your name like spell, reach for you just like a drowning man

    They say we took the long way
    They say the clouds are grey

    They say we’re coming home soon
    Say we’ll soon touch down
    I don’t see that, I’ve only eyes for home

    They say we took the long way
    They say the clouds are grey
    I don’t see that, I’ve only eyes for home

    How I wrote ‘I Still Smile’

    I Still Smile was written for FAWM 2008, a month in which I also finished the title track for Spinning the Compass.

    In keeping with the themes from Mechanism, it’s about the difficulty of making genuine contact with others.

    The lyrics are from the point of view of an inanimate metal and latex figure that the ‘You’ of the song has purchased as a companion.

    Here’s the demo:-

    I Still Smile (Demo)

    I can’t deny the Radiohead influence on this one, particularly in the subject matter, but also in the composition – building up to a climax, in this case the pitch-shifted harmony vocals, is quite a Radioheadesque thing to do. The slow build-up of layers and the high pitched vocals are quite Radiohead as well I suppose.

    Do I ever write anything original?

    I have all the time you need
    I have all you want
    My arms are always here
    To make you feel complete

    Even when you’re crying, I still smile.

    My face is fixed in a permanent grin
    My latex skin never frowns
    You bought me, to make you feel complete
    And I’ll always be here

    Even when you’re crying, I still smile.

    And your last touch of real skin hurt too much.

    But I have all the time you need
    My love never dies

    Image Copyright WebWizzard 2009

    How I wrote ‘Mechanism’

    I thought it might be fun to do a blog post about each of the songs on Spinning the Compass

    This song is a little naughty. It began life as a song about the antikythera mechanism but as so many things do, eventually ended up about sex.

    This mechanism it’s driving us apart,
    It shines a prism on the kind of love we share
    This mechanism is making passion spoil
    It tastes of something the cloying tang of wine and oil
    Our love relies on clockwork
    The careful use of gears and wheels

    More specifically, it’s about a love affair that has been corrupted by toys, cogs and machinery, to the point where genuine human contact seems impossible.

    Of course, such despairing and bleak lyrics have to be set to a jaunty tune.

    You and me in the gaslight with our machinery
    Our artificial steam powered hearts will never set us free
    This mecanism isn’t you or me

    The song was written for February Album Writing Month, and began as a couple of largely wordless improvisations (Warning, what follows are very rough demo recordings of a work in progress).

    Improv 1

    This is the first improvisation I recorded. At this point I had one line of lyrics, some chords, a vague idea of the groove/bass line and little else.

    You can hear me trying out ideas, and playing little bits of melody on the guitar to make clear to myself what I was singing.

    This is how I usually improvise – guitar and voice at the same time and little idea of what the eventual lyrics will be – though I usually do have at least one line to give me an idea of mood.

    Improv 2

    Here you can hear me improvising to try and figure out a chorus – some of the original chords from this survived, as did the ‘way you get to me’ arpeggio.

    One difference you can hear is that I’ve a much clearer idea of how the verses will sound. In between these improvs I wrote a few lines down.

    Both of these sound files, as rough and ready as they are, illustrate how the song began to develop. Here’s the demo I posted for FAWM09 – the finished song, albeit not recorded as well as the version on Spinning the Compass.

    Mechanism (FAWM09 Demo)

    The full lyrics are:

    This mechanism it’s driving us apart,
    It shines a prism on the kind of love we share
    This mechanism is making passion spoil
    It tastes of something the cloying tang of wine and oil
    Our love relies on clockwork
    The careful use of gears and wheel

    This mechanism it isn’t how we feel

    You and me in the gaslight with our machinery
    Our artificial steam powered hearts will never set us free
    This mecanism isn’t you or me

    The games we’re playing type writers for our hearts
    The rules and rhythms
    The limits of a steam powered love
    It started somewhere lighter
    Somehow we got lost somewhre
    This mechanism won’t get us anywhere

    You and me in the gaslight with our machinery
    Our artificial steam powered hearts will never set us free
    This mechanism isn’t you or me

    Oil is the wine
    Roses in the chains
    Burning a pilot light
    Isn’t carrying a flame

    You and me in the gaslight with our machinery
    Our artificial steam powered hearts will never set us free
    This mechanism isn’t you or me

    My First Online Gig

    On Wednesday I played my first online gig, via Ustream:

    The setlist was:

    • Mechanism
    • August and Whiteface
    • Moon behind the Sun
    • Something’s Bound to Happen
    • Self Made Man
    • Black Water
    • Spinning the Compass
    • Where Once They Had Hearts
    • Jetpack

    Most of which can also be heard via my solo album or Comrade Robot’s bandcamp or youtube pages.

    It was easily the most fun I’ve had at a gig for ages, especially because of all the silliness in the ustream chatroom.

    The sound and vision were pretty good, though listening back I would have liked the guitar quieter. Rather than ripping the audio straight from here, I’m thinking of doing another seperate acoustic recording of some of these  songs today. Because I can.

    Thanks to all those who listened, and if you didn’t the video above will show you what you missed.